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This is an experiment that I'm trying out for school.
This is the back of the book
Reference to the front:
I totally drew and submitted this painting with Sakura already so i just used it back.
I REALLY NEED FEEDBACK on this one PREFERABLY A CRITIQUE.
I dont care how harsh you guys might be in the critique(if they are any
) but i really need you guys honest opinion on this one.
I need to see if this is effective or not pertaining to the actual comic.
So in the
can you please include:
- Does it catch your interest?
- What attracts you most to this back?
- By looking at the back, what kind of comic do you think this is?
- Is it effective enough in terms of what the comic is about?
- Where did it improve?
- Does the description of the story interest you?
- Is the background more interesting than the intro?
- Where did it fall?
- Would this back and intro interest you in buying the book?
- Would you buy the book without ever reading the intro?
- Any suggestions on improvement?
I will be looking forward for your suggestions and feedback
This is the back of the book
Reference to the front:
I totally drew and submitted this painting with Sakura already so i just used it back.
I REALLY NEED FEEDBACK on this one PREFERABLY A CRITIQUE.
I dont care how harsh you guys might be in the critique(if they are any
) but i really need you guys honest opinion on this one. I need to see if this is effective or not pertaining to the actual comic.
So in the
can you please include:- Does it catch your interest?
- What attracts you most to this back?
- By looking at the back, what kind of comic do you think this is?
- Is it effective enough in terms of what the comic is about?
- Where did it improve?
- Does the description of the story interest you?
- Is the background more interesting than the intro?
- Where did it fall?
- Would this back and intro interest you in buying the book?
- Would you buy the book without ever reading the intro?
- Any suggestions on improvement?
I will be looking forward for your suggestions and feedback
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Overall
Vision Originality Technique ImpactPersonally I wouldn't buy this book based on the cover, but that's due to personal preferences.
From an objective stand point the story seems fairly bog standard and probably won't hook anyone straight away. I recommend you give a bit more of the plot away, to make the book seem more exciting. Not so much that you blow the whole story, but right now the story seems so boring, like your laying the plot for the first few pages of the first chapter, rather than the whole story.
Also the text looks too large, giving the impression that the page is cluttered, like your trying to fit too much onto the page. I surgest you make the text smaller and confine it to the left or right hand side. In fitting with that it may be a good idea to shorten the image to the opposite side.
On a side not, most manga present an initial plot synopsis, then under that a brief synopsis of the current chapter. Something to consider.
Hope I helped.